高海涛——新四级段落翻译题型辅导.pptVIP

四级新题型段落翻译指导 高海涛 Dec. 2013 词汇？语法？惯用法？ 一、翻译的评价标准： 大纲： 忠实、通顺 高境界：信、达、雅 Example 原文 宋人有闵①其苗之不长②而揠③之者，芒芒然④归，谓⑤其人⑥曰：“今日病⑦矣！予⑧助苗长矣！”其子趋⑨而往⑩视之，苗则槁?矣。 ① 闵（mǐn）：同“悯”，担心，忧虑。 ② 长（zhǎng）：生长，成长。 ③ 揠（yà）：拔。 ④茫茫然：疲倦的样子或疲劳的样子。 ⑤　谓：对……说 ⑥其人：他家里的人。 ⑦ 病：精疲力尽，是引申义。 ⑧ 予：我，第一人称代词。 ⑨ 趋：快走。 ⑩往：去，到……去。 ?槁（gǎo）：草木枯干。 Modern Chinese 宋国有个人担忧他的禾苗不长高，就拔高了禾苗，一天下来十分疲劳，回到家对他的家人说：“今天可把我累坏了，我帮助禾苗长高了！”他儿子听说后急忙到地里去看苗，然而苗都枯萎了。 (百度百科） 译文1 In the Song Dynasty, there was a man who worried about his crops growing two slowly. So he went to the field and pulled the crops up. After a day, he was very tired, and came back home and told his family members that : “I’m very tired, I helped the crops grow.” After his son heard this he went to the field to look and the crops are dead. 评价： 不信、不达、更不雅。 In the Song Dynasty 是误译，是宋国 two slowly. Too 拼写错误 After a day, 是误译，应该是 a whole day’s work told his family members that : “I’m …” that 是引导从句的，直接引用前不用that I’m very tired, I helped the crops grow 分居中应有连词衔接, help应该用完成体。 the crops are dead 不够忠实，应该是withered 译文2 In the Kingdom of Song in ancient China, there was a man who was worried about his crops growing too slowly. So he went to the field and pulled the crops up. After a day’s work, he was very tired, and came back home and told his family: “I’m very tired, because I have helped the crops grow.” After his son heard this, he went to the field to look and found the crops have withered. 评价：忠实、通顺但是不够“雅”，主要是不够凝练，用词及结构的难度不够。 译文3 In the Kingdom of Song in ancient China, there was a man who was worried that his crops were not growing, so he set out pulling up the crops a little bit. After a day’s hard work, he came back home exhausted. He then told his family: “I’m worn out today, but I have helped our crops grow.” Hearing this, his son went to the field to check things out, only to find a field of withered crops. 评价：基本做到了“信、达、雅”，译文较好。 二、用词 1. 注意用词准确，不要有拼写、搭配、词形、丢词、添词等问题，eg. Out of the question 和out of the question意思是不一样的。 而 call sb names 和 call sb’s