英语人教版九年级全册How to better English writing.pptxVIP

How to better your English writingTeaching objectiveAt the end of the class, you will be able to:better your English writing from 5 aspectsWhat kind of writing can be outstanding?第一档 （15-13）评分标准:文段表达评分标准:第一档 （15-13）1.词汇丰富。(Rich vocabulary)2.句式多样。(Attractive sentences)3.语言准确。(Correct grammar)4.语意连贯,表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 (Tight logic)5. 结构清晰。(Clear structure)6.完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全, 详略得当。(Outline)1. Rich vocabulary(1) Better the word.I love running because it helps me lose weight and keep fit..enjoyam fond of am interested in1. Rich vocabulary(1) Better the word.Running helps both my body and my mind.shapes1. Rich vocabulary(2) Better the phrase.During the three years, I have taken part in different kinds of activities. various kinds ofa variety of1. Rich vocabulary(2) Better the phrase.Because of basketball, I developunbreakable friendship with my teammates and become more confident.Thanks toOwing to1. Rich vocabulary(3) Add adj.We will present you with a performance.We will present you with a well-prepared performance.1. Rich vocabulary(3) Add adv.We were excited at the news.We were extremely excited at the news. Pair workBetter the sentences by using different sentence patterns.2. Attractive sentences1)Use adverbial clause(状语从句).My school life is colorful and meaningful. I will neverforget it. My school life is so colorful and meaningful that I will never forget it.2. Attractive sentences2)Use attributive clause(定语从句).We finally won the game. It made us jump up and downin excitement. We finally won the game, which made us jump upand down in excitement.2. Attractive sentences3)Use exclamatory sentence (感叹句). The voluntary work is very meaningful and rewarding.How meaningful and rewarding the voluntary work is!2. Attractive sentences4)Use negative sentences(否定句).We will be happy if you bring some gifts with you. will be happyWe can’t be happier if you bring some gifts with you.2. Attractive sentences5)Use inverted sentence(倒装句).We achieve our goal only in this way.only in this wa