英语人教版九年级全册how to better writing.docxVIP

如何写好英语作文 (How to Better a Piece of Writing) 一．中考作文评分标准 第四档(15—18分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。 第三档(10—14分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。 第二档(4—9分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。 第一档(0—3分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。 二．2014年中考书面表达 (15分) 为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示: 1. 阅读的重要性。 2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地 介绍好书等） Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good . More people will like reading. 三．How can we make the writing better ? （我们如何才能使我们的书面表达更好） Better the layout (布局) Better the grammar Better the vocabulary (词汇) Better the sentences Better the logic (逻辑) Step 1 Put the writing into a better layout. (布局) Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I wish my advices could be good . More people will like reading. Step 2 Better the grammar（语法） (Find the grammatical mistakes找出语法错误) Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important for us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want t