英语人教版九年级全册书面表达专题指导.docVIP

英语书面表达专题指导教案 ( 写人) ------李锦城 一.导入 要想写好一篇书面表达,关键是要掌握一定的写作方法,再按照方法熟练运用,才能做到游刃有余.(记住:用最熟悉的单词,最简单的句子表达所要表达的内容) 二.英语书面表达七步骤: 1. 审 2. 定 3. 列 4. 连 5. 改 6. 美 7. 抄 三.学生的习作(现学现用) 根据下列内容,用英语写一篇介绍世界著名童话作家安徒生(Anderson)短文,词数70字左右. 他生于1850年,十一岁丧父，由于家庭贫穷，童年时期没能上学，十四岁时到一家剧院工作，后来在一些好心人的帮助下上了学。1828年接受了高等教育（higher educaation），毕业后，他写了许多小说，诗歌等。他努力工作，获得了很大的成功。他一生共写了160多个故事。1875年去逝。他是世界上最伟大的作家之一。 Adnerson is my favourite writer .He was born in 1850.When he was eleven years old ,his father was died.Because his family was poor,so he couldnt go to school when he was young. When he fourteen years old, he worked in a obred. Then some people helped him go to school. In 1828, Anderson had higher education . When Anderson left school , he wrote lots of novels , works.Because he worked hard , so he counld be successful . He wrote 106 stories in his life .Adnerson has been death since 1875. Anderson is one of the most famours writers in the world. -----陶春慧 改错:1.When he was eleven years old ,his father was died. 2.Because his family was poor,sohe couldnt go to school when he was young. 3.When he fourteen years old, he worked in a obred. 4.Then some people helped him go to school 5.In 1828, Anderson had higher education 6. Because he worked hard , so he counld be successful . 7.He wrote 106 stories in his life .Adnerson has been death since 1875. 8.Anderson is one of the most famours writers in the world. 四.佳作欣赏: 一、假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示，以My favorite teacher 为题目，用英语写一篇短文。 要求：1.必须包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三个方面的内 容，括号内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校。 3.字数（80-100）（文章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总次数） favorite teacher: ①description (appearance, character…) ②friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends) ③the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful…）