英语人教版九年级全册书面表达的技巧.pptVIP

I like Liu Qian. He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician. because CCTV Spring Festival Gala surprised did magic shows He did magic shows so well that everyone was surprised. so…that… (春节联欢晚会） He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised. He took the ring out of an egg. People cheered for him. when as soon as after because 欢呼 won many prizes worked hard, Make sentences with suitable conjunction because so…that… before after when (连词） not like fish, it healthy although so…that… but because Make sentences with suitable conjunction (连词） knew Liu Qian, met him in Beijing. not…until… when as soon as before after since Make sentences with suitable conjunction (连词） Jay 初中英语 书面表达写作技巧指导 安远县凤山初中 唐忠煌 书面表达考查： 语言操作能力 书面交流能力 要求考生掌握： 词汇知识 语法知识 遣词造句能力 运用英语进行思维的能力 培养学生： 读写技能 观察、记忆、思维、想象能力 创新精神 综合语言运用能力 解读书面表达 畅谈问题 学生作文主要存在的问题 1.词汇量不足 eg: 上个星期，我们去了海边度假。 Last week, we went to the beach on . vacation eg: 我想成为一名志愿者 I want to be a . volunteer 2.语法混乱 eg: 我喜欢猪 误: I is like a pig. 误: I am like a pig. 正: I like pigs. eg: 很久很久以前，有一个叫愚公的老头。 误:Long long ago, have an old man called Yu Gong. 正: Long long ago, there was an old man called Yu Gong. 3.母语束缚 eg:我非常喜欢李易峰。 误: I very like Li Yifeng. eg: 我每天骑自行车去上学。 正: I like Li Yifeng very much. 误: I every day by bike go to school. 正: I go to school by bike every day. 4.逻辑混乱，思路不畅 5.卷面不工整，字迹潦草,涂涂改改 指点迷津 一、写作方法与技巧: (1) 仔细审题，弄清题意 (2)罗列要点，编写提纲 (3) 组织语言，连句成篇 (4)认真修改，反复核查 二、掌握得分技巧 （一）恰当使用高级词汇 例1 我认为他一个星期以后会回来。 A: I think he will be back in a week. (常见句子) B: In my opinion, he will be back in a week. （高级句子） 　 例2 他们帮助了我们，所以我们按时到达了那里。 A. They helped us, so we got there on time.(常见句子) B. Thanks to their help, we got there on time.（高级句子）　 （二）交替使用不同句式 长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共存，还可使用简化句等 1.善用不同的表达方式 　　例如：我生病了，明天不能去上学 1）I’m ill. I can’t go to school tomorrow. (太简单！句子松散) 2）I’m ill so I can’t go to school tomorrow.（并列句） 3）I’m so seriously ill t