英语人教版九年级全册中考书面表达复习训练.pptVIP

English Writing 中考英语书面表达;《课程标准》五级“写”的要求 ;; ;中考书面表达的主要形式：;;How to write a past thing?;能力要求;Writing skills;请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观． 提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车去参观了一家农场． 　　　 ２．在农场里你们野炊，唱歌跳舞，下棋，说笑话，讲故事，玩的非常高兴． 　　　 ３．结尾已给出. 要求：１．可围绕主题适当发挥，但应包含所给要点． 　　　 ２．词数60左右，所给结尾不记入总数． …The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. ;　　一、审题: 确定基本要素:5W1H 何 何 何 为 如 何 时 地 人 何 何 事 　When: _______ Who :_______ Where : _______ What : _______　Why :_______ 　How : _______ 　　 　　　　　　　　　　;二、抓要点;三、扩展成句;第四步 连句成文;Key points：　 　visited a farm 　 met ···bus 　　　 　　　　　 had a　picnic　 played chess 　　 danced···sang　　told jokes···stories ;　　　第五步 查错改错; We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head of the farm showed we around. We were happy to see the crops and vegetables grew well. At noon we had a picnic lunch. After a short rest, we have great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a well time. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. ; Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. ;第六步 誊写;卷面潦草 涂改较多!; ;书面表达中存在的问题; 二、基础不牢，语用错误。 1.语序错误 He often on foot goes home. He every day works hard. I am in Grade 8, Class 5. 2. 动词用法错误 I like play basketball.