概要写作(Nancy月考作文讲评).pptVIP

高考新题型之 概要写作 Summary 《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》 概要写作： 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分） 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要去来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 词数少于40的和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑 ... 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。 概要写作评分解读 评分原则 本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分 第五档(21-25) 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。 ﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏ complete correct coherent concise:no copying 4C原则 complete correct How to polish your summary to meet the 4C requirements of criteria complete correct coherent concise Writing Step 3: Make a summary and polish it 学生习作常见错误1: Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be complete) 学生习作常见错误1: Incomplete 要点遗落 The first: the phenomenon---the popularity of cell phones The last : proper use Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be coherent) 学生习作常见错误2: Cell phones are one of the greatest inventions of modern technology. But just as there are always two sides of a coin, they have many advantages and disadvantages. Their main advantage is to make our life easier and more convenient. On the other hand, they have a bad effect on our life. To be honest, whether they are a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon is decided by us human. Incoherence 过渡不自然 Transitional words: 学生习作常见错误3: Pain and pleasure are a result of modern technology. (From ZH, Class 6) The advanced technology has caused a danger that we keep ignoring. Get cheaper and cheaper Not concise 引用原文词句 No copying 不得直接引用原文的句子 Writing step 3: Meet the 4c requirements of criteria (to be concise) 学生习作常见错误3: Technology has advantages and disadvantages, such as cell phones. (From WQ ,Class5) We should make full use of cell phones--- Not concise 内容理解有误 2) To be exact 概括内容要准确 To be brief 概括内容需精要 学生习作常见错误3: Such as--- Too many examples Not concise 使用太多细节，语言不够概括 3) To be brief 概括内容需精要 Ways to make the sentences concise(4 skills) Are cell phones a useful instrument or a dangerous