第五课语法和文体错误分析.pptVIP

第五课语法与文体错误分析;;I. Comma Splice (逗号叠加);Correct: (1) … vacuum; it is … (2) … entertaining, for they are… Tips: Comma can not be used between two complete sentences. If the contents of the two sentences are connected, we may use semicolon“;” Or we use linking words.;II. Choppy Style(文体紊乱);;Correct one: We have established a communications Systems (CS) Planning Team which includes …division. We hold regular meetings to assess state-of-the-art communications equipment and to discuss how new products…. At these meetings, the user representatives describe their other future needs and work out the