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考研英语十篇重点预测作文（重点句式 经典点评） 一、低碳与环保 低碳与环保 构思点拨 图片中一个小男孩，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依然在播放，这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了 电视，还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。 但是，我们如果从更宏观，更深层次的角度去思考，这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活 理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如 下： 第一段：描述图画；第二段：列举现象，分析影响；第三段：建议措施，展望未来。 思维拓展 环保话题，例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳 的角度入手展开写作。 高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。 第 1 页第 1 页 考研英语十篇重点预测作文（重点句式 经典点评） This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。 To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。 佳作妙译 如上图生动地展示，一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮 他关了电视，责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。 这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视，实际上并不看。 这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。 低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保