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上海市2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编 书面表达专题 上海师范大学附属中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题 VI. Guided Writing（25%） 69. Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 -words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，去年暑假你和你的家人去了朋友Jim所在的城市罗马旅游，回来后你想 对他表达自己的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Jim写一封信，词数不少于120——150。 1.罗马的风景和美食令人印象深刻，你玩的很开心。 2.谈谈你对旅游的看法并推荐一个地方邀请Jim一家来旅游。 【答案】Dear Jim, How are you doing these days? Thank you for your help and kindness while we were traveling in Rome. It was very kind of you to treat us to good meals，and show us around. Rome is really a very good place to visit. We were greatly impressed by its beautiful scenery and delicious food.I had a great time there and learned a lot about Rome. And I would like to invite you to visit Beijing. Ill show you around the places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope youll come to China and let me show you around Beijing. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给Jim写一封信，表达自己对他的感谢之情。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.罗马的风景和美食令人印象深刻，你玩的很开心。 2. 谈谈你对旅游的看法并推荐一个地方邀请Jim一家来旅游。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） show sb. around ; be impressed by；have a great time； places of interest；look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1.How are you doing these days? 2.Thank you for your help and kindness while we were traveling in Rome. 3.It was very kind of you to treat us to good meals，and show us around. 4.Rome is really a very good place to visit. We were greatly impressed by its beautiful scenery and delicious food. 5.I had a great time there and learned a lot about Rome. 6.And I would like to invite you to visit Beijing. 7.Ill show you around the places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. 8.Thanks again for all your efforts! 9.I do hope youll come to China and let me show you around Beijing. 10.Looking forward to your early reply. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句