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2023年雅思考试小作文真题范文

静态表：五个国家移民数量

Thetablebelowshowsthenumberofimmigrants

fromfivedifferentcountriestothesefivecountriesin

2002.

【开头段】

ThetablecomparesBritain,Germany,Poland,Italy

andSpainintermsofthenumberofimmigrantsthat

theyreceivedfromthesefivecountriesintheyear

2002.

【概述段】

Overall,comparedwithpeoplefromotherfour

countries,morePolishpeopledecidedtoliveabroad.

Also,UKenjoyedthegreatestpopularityamongthese

fivecountries.

【Body1】

Itisclearthatcomparedwithothercountries,UK

andGermanyattractedmoreimmigrants.Tobemore

specific,8.9millionPolishpeoplemigratedtoUK,

whichwasroughlytwicethefigureforItalianand

Spanishemigrants.However,UKonlyattracted2.3

millionGermans.Meanwhile,Germanyattracted0.8

millionpeoplefromUK,makingitthemostpopular

1

destinationofsettlementforBritishimmigrants.

Besides,thenumbersofemigrantsfromtheother

threecountrieswhodecidedtosettleinGermanywere

alllargerthan3million.

【思路解析】本段描述接受移民最多的UK和

Germany，2个国家内部重点数据对比。

语言点提示：采用生活化表达方式而不是机械描述数

据信息

【Body2】

WecanalsofindthatPolanddidnotenjoymuch

popularityamongemigrantsfromtheotherfour

countries,withthefiguresrangingfrom0.1millionto

0.5million.ItalyandSpainwerechosenbyroughlythe

samenumberofimmigrantsfromUK,withthefigure

ofaround0.5million.Likewise,Germanypeoplewho

migratedtoItalyandSpainhadasimilarfigure,at