第三节-选用句型-(四级辅导-练习).pptVIP

第三节选用句型练习讲解1.请将下面的长句和短句进行优化改写，使其更符合表达需要Thecaptainwasatall,thinmanwithabigmustache.Hewaspacingthebridgewithalookofimportance.Thecaptain,atall,thinmanwithabigmustache，waspacingthebridgewithalookofimportance.分析：两个简单句被优化成一个简单句，第一句被简化成同位语Thegradingsystematourcollegeshouldbeabolished.Thestudentsdon’tlikegettinggrades.Theinstructorsdon’tenjoygivinggrades.Thegradingsystematourcollegeshouldbeabolished,becauseneitherthestudentsnortheinstructorslikeit.分析：三个简单句被优化成一个复合句。后两句合成一个原因状语从句，neither…nor…连接并列主语。Theproblemofthereserveofrawmaterialsisbecomingmoreserious.Itshowsitisimportanttobeginaplan.Weshouldconserveanddivideupthenaturalresourcesonworldwidescale.分析：三个简单句被优化成一个复合句。第一句变成名词短语充当主句的主语，第三句变成不定式短语充当目的状语Theseriousnessoftheproblemonthereservesofrawmaterialsshowsthatitisimportanttosetupaplantoconserveanddivideupfairlynaturalresourcesonaworldwidescale.Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommate.Theythinkeverypersonhashisorherownway.Andseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantness.分析：三个简单句优化成一个复合句。第一句变成“名词+定语从句”充当主语，第二句和第三句合并成宾语从句，第二句变成宾语从句中的原因状语从句Thosewhodon’tlikehavingroommatesarguethatseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisorherownway.Naturalresourcesareverylimited.Theywillbeexhaustedinthenearfuture.Itisnottrue.Butitbecomesamajorconcernaroundtheworld.Thisiswidelyacceptedfact.分析：五个简单句被优化成一个复合句。第三句变成让步状语从句，第一句变成名词短语，与二、四句共同组成一个主语从句，与第五句合成一个主从复合句，用it代替该主语从句充当形式主语Itisawidelyacceptedfactthatthereisamajorconcernaroundtheworldfortheexhaustionoflimitednaturalresourcesinthenearfuture,thoughitisunlikelytobetrue.2.请按照所给提示对下面的作文进行句式优化（1）China’sseven-dayholidaysforLaborDayandtheNationalDaynowareenteringtheirninth.（2）Thepossibilityofcancelingtheholidays,usuallycalled“Go