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高考英语读后续写语篇练习当老人接到了诈骗电话1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文GrandpaBillRodgershasnarrowlyescapedaphonescam(欺骗).Itallbeganwithatelephonecall.BillisanelderlymanfromCincinnati,Ohio,whowaslookingforwardtospendingtimewithhisfamilyovertheholidays.TheywereallcomingtovisithimathisElmwoodPlacehome,includinghisadultgrandsonDavid.Oneafternoon,whilenappinginbed,hewasawakenedbythesharpringingofhistelephone.4

续写原文“Whowillringmeupatthistime?”Hewondered.Peeringtowardsthephone,hehesitantlypickeditup.Fromthereceivercameanurgentvoice.“Grandpa,thisisDavid.Iamintrouble.”BeforeBillcouldaskhimanyquestion,hecontinued,onandoff,halfcrying,“Ihitawoman’scarandshewassevenmonthspregnant.AndtheychargedmewithdrunkendrivingandI’minprison...”Hesobbedloudly.HisvoicewassobrokenthatBillcouldhardlymatchitwiththegentleandwarmvoiceofhisgrandson.PoorDavid!Hemustbesuffering!Billpanicked(惊慌)immediately.5

续写原文Withoutmoredetailedcommunication,thephonepassedsuddenlytoanotherperson—David’slawyerwhohadadeepervoice.Seemingly,heunderstoodBill’sanxietyandattemptedtocomforthimwithasolution.“NowtheonlywaytohelpDavidistogotoWal-Martandtransfer$2,300toanotherstore.IwouldpickupthemoneyandthenuseittopostDavid’sbail(保释金).”“IamsureeverythingwouldbeOKaslongasthemoneyisinplace,”headded.Ultimately,heloweredhisvoice,“Don’ttellanybody.Youdon’twanttomakeyourgrandsonlookuglyinyourneighborhood.”ThelawyerhungupevenbeforeBillcouldgiveananswer.6

段首句Para1：Billwastotallyataloss.Para2：TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.7

Part2题目分析8

续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了老人Bill一天突然接到一个电话，电话里称孙子David遇到了麻烦，被指控酒后驾车，现在关在监狱里。律师告诉老人唯一能帮助David的方法就是去沃尔玛把2300美元转到另一家商店，然后用它来交David的保释金。并且嘱咐老人不要把这件事告诉别人。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一