【读后续写】高中英语读后续写讲评：100 dollars 名师课件-周媚.pptx

ContinuationWriting台州第一中学周媚老师

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CharactersgrandmaStructurepickupcheckguess/imagine(realcharacter)(imaginarycharacter)Part4(para6-7)dealwithMegan,momatallman,niece,Part1Part2Part3(para1):(para2):(para3-5):thebillonthewaytoschoolthebillatschooltheownerofthebillonthewayhomeontheschoolbus_______________________________________thebillathome,inthesupermarket

Walkingslowlytowardsherhouse,shedebatedwhethertotellhermomofhernew-foundtreasure.thinkcarefullyPart4(para6-7)dealwiththebilluneasy/nervous,guilty,relievedstruggle，feeling,action，dialogue,decision...action,feeling,ending...struggleThenextdaywasSaturdayandMeganandhermomarrivedatthesupermarketearly.

(para6)Walkingslowlytowardsherhouse,shedebatedwhethertotellhermomofhernew-foundtreasure.struggle,feeling(nervousness/uneasiness，guilty，relieved),action，dialogue,decision...

Struggle1Struggling/Tornbetweenkeepingthesecretandtalkingtomom,Meganwasataloss,soshepulledoutthebill,straighteningandcrumplingitagainandagain.（徐心瑶）2Treats,toysandnewskirtsthatshehadalwaysdreamedoffloodedintohermind.Meanwhile,mom’swordsofbeinganhonestgirlwereechoing.inherhead.(杨易铮)3Thedevilinhermindtriedtopersuadeherinthesweetestvoicewhileanotherstrongvoicekepttellingheroftobehonest.(周逸飏)4Suddenlyademonpoppedoutfromherheart,whispering,“Don’tbeguilty.TheBillbelongstoyou.”Butthesecondmomentshethoughtofhermother’sconstantreminder:Alwaysbeanhonestgirl.邱(俊渊)

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