读后续写：老爸教游泳 讲义--高考英语复习写作专项.docx

读后续写：老爸教游泳讲义

读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasachild,therewasasummerdaythatforeverchangedthewayIviewedthesea.?Itwasabrightandsunnyday,andmyfamilyandIwereenjoyingapeacefuloutingatthebeach.Ispentmytimeneartheshore,?happilybuildingsandcastlesandwatchingtheplayfulwavescrashontothesandyshore.

AsIplayed,somethingcolorfulcaughtmyattention.Itwasatoyfloating（漂浮）inthewater,?justafewmetersawayfromme.?Theexcitementofdiscoveringanewtoytookoverme.Withoutasecondthought,?Iracedtowardthewater,?determinedtoreachthetoy.

However,asIwentdeeperintothesea,asuddenrealizationstruckme--Ididn’tknowhowtoswim,soIpanickedasthewaterquicklydeepenedaroundme.?Istruggledtomovemyarmsandlegs,desperatelytryingtoreachthesurface.

Inthatmomentofdanger,?justashopebegantodisappear,astrongarmreachedoutandpulledmefromthewater.?Itwasmyfather,whohadbeenkeepingawatchfuleyeonmefromadistance.?Hehadnoticedmycarelessactand?swiftlycametomyrescue.Iheldhimtightly,feelingthewarmthofhisloveandconcern,and?asenseofsecuritywrappedaroundme.

Fromthatpointforward,myrelationshipwiththesea?underwentagreattransformation.?Theonceinvitingwavesnowappeareddangerousandunpredictable.?WheneverIstoodontheshoreline,?thememoriesofthatterrifyingincidentfloodedmymind,remindingmethatIshouldkeepasafedistancefromthewater.ThefearIdevelopedafterthatincidentwasdeeplyrooted,anditstayedwithmeforalongtime,?muchlikeashadow?thatfolloweditsowner.?Theseaalwaysgavemeendlessfear.

注意：

1.?续写词数应为150左右；

2.?请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para.1Butmyfatherwasdeterminedtohelpmeovercomemyfear.

Para.2AsIbecamemoreskillfulatswimming,mylovefortheseagrew.

文章分析：

这篇文章主要讲述了作者童年时在海边的一次经历，因追逐水中漂浮的玩具而陷入危险，幸得父亲相救，从此对大海的态度从喜爱变为恐惧，突出了这次意外事件对作者心理产生的深刻影响，主题围绕个人经历与情感转变展开。

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