65　第三部分　读后续写　第二节　第5讲　续写热点话题　热心助人.pptxVIP

读后续写第二节热点突破第5讲续写热点话题热心助人第三部分写作专题突破

第5讲续写热点话题热心助人典例演示(2022·浙江6月卷改编)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社区)inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.

Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasntuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.第5讲续写热点话题热心助人

Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.Idcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididnthavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,shedberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.第5讲续写热点话题热心助人

Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidnthaveaplacetocallhomeandthattheonlyfoodtheygot