英语高三总复习(高中英语写作技巧指导教学实录2).docVIP

高英语写作技巧指导教学实录 （第二课时） 中山市小榄实验高中 邓 确 Ⅰ. Warming up: Teacher: Where do you live? Students: I live in Xiaoan. Teacher: Can you tell me something about Xiaolan in English? Students: Yes , we can. Teacher: How do you like Xiaolan? What do you think of Xiaolan? Students: It is quite beautiful. It is clean. I like Xiaolan. Ⅱ.Presentation: Teacher: Please take out your writing of “my hometown” that you finished yesterday. Take one student’s writing as example: Students: (They take out their writings. ) 【写作内容】 题目：My hometown 地点 小榄 人口 30万 面积 71.47平方公里 地理位置 广东省中山市北部 天气与气候 地处亚热带（in the semi-tropical region）,年平均气温21℃，最冷的1月平均13℃，最热的7月28℃ 其他情况 以菊花（chrysanthemum）闻名，工业发展迅速 My Hometown My hometown is Xiaolan, it is famous for the Chrysanthemum, and the industry develop quickly. The population of Xiaolan is 300 thousand. It is located in the northern of Zhongshan in Guangdong. It has the square area of 71.49. Because it belongs to the Semi-tropical region, the yearly average temperature is 21°C. In January the oldest average temperature is 13°C, 28°C is the hottest in July. Teacher: Let’s see how did she re-collect information. How much information did she re-collect in the passage？ Students: six 第一要点：家乡的地点和其他情况 第二要点：人口 第三要点：位置 第四要点：面积 第五要点：天气 第六要点：气候 Teacher: 信息组织得好吗？ Students: 不好，超过了5句话，并且所有的信息点没能组织好。 Teacher: 如果是你，你会怎样抓住信息点，怎样整理并重组信息？ How much information in this topic？ Students: seven. Teacher: Re-collect the information into 5 information. Students: 信息点一：小榄的地理位置 信息点二：人口和面积 信息点三：天气 信息点四：最冷，最热的温度 信息点五：其他情况 Teacher: Translate the information in simple sentences. Students: 1）My hometown is Xiaolan. It lies in the north of Zhongshan , Guangzhou Province. 2) It has a population of 30 thousand . It covers 71.47 K㎡. 3）It lies in the semi- tropical region , the average temperature is 21℃. 4）January is coldest with 13℃ on average. July is the hottest ,28 ℃. 5）Xiaolan is famous for chrysanthemum . We are happy to se