英语高三总复习(高中英语写作技巧指导教学实录3).docVIP

高英语写作技巧指导教学实录 （第三课时）中山市小榄实验高中 赵 芳 Ⅰ. Revision: T: Class begins. Good morning, everyone! S: Good morning, Helen! T: In last lesson, we have known how to re-collect the information into 5 sentences. Let’s recall the methods again. Please take out your writing of “my hometown” that you finished yesterday and read out the five sentences. S: 1. My hometown is Xiaolan, it is famous for the Chrysanthemum, and the industry develop quickly. 2. The population of Xiaolan is 300 thousand. 3. It is located in the northern of Zhongshan in Guangdong and It has the square area of 71.49. 4. Because it belongs to the Semi-tropical region, the yearly average temperature is 21°C. 5. In January the oldest average temperature is 13°C, 28°C is the hottest in July. T: Then, how do we put these 5 sentences into a passage? How can we improve our English sentences? We will discuss and learn the methods this lesson. Ⅱ. Writing strategies: T: Now, please look at the screen. I’ll introduce to you some writing strategies. T: (The students look at the screen.) Think it over and try to fill in the blanks. 一、How to improve your English sentences? Complete the sentences with non-predicate 1. _________the news, they got excited. 2. __________________many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3. Unless ________to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting. T: (several minutes later) Can you tell me the answer? S: (with the teacher’s help) Hearing, Having been told, invited T: Very good! Let’s come to the next step. Look at the screen and pay attention to the first part of each sentences. Improve the sentences with inversion 1. Child as/though he is, he knows a lot. 2. On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”. T: Please remember this structure. Now I’d like you to translate one sentence. Improve the sentences with different kinds of sentence patterns 我碰巧遇见他的叔叔。 ① I happened to meet his uncle. ② I chanced to see his uncle. ③ I m