大学英语四级写作高分技巧精要.ppt

改革后，写作部分占总分数的15%（105分），要求字数在120-180间，太多或太少均扣分。 在单词（词汇）上，要求学生尽可能的使用大学词汇和短语来表达思想，遣词造句； 在语法上，要求学生熟练运用虚拟语气、倒装句式、定语从句、分词作状语等中等难度以上的语法来表达思想； 在结构上，要求段落分布合理，能有力的辅助考生表达思想； 在论点上，要求考生观点分明，不能模棱两可或含含蓄蓄； 在论据的使用上，要求有理、有据、有节。 2.1 高分作文标志 1：是否长短句交叉； 2、是否会使用插入语； 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段： It is , therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) Computer and I  By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected , and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search for an army of 替换 a lot of Sample 2 The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in a large number! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事