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高三复习之英语写作指导 　　对于很多高中生来说，英语写作是一件很难掌握的语言技能。学生不但对于作文的基本结构，语言的衔接方面的知识欠缺，而且词汇匮乏，受汉语思维的影响较大，思路不够开阔，写作时无从下手。 　　高三复习阶段，教师应该帮助学生理清思路，有系统的指导写作技巧，扫除学生写作中的障碍。 　　一、学生高考作文得分低的几个特点 　　1.词汇错误频出；语言不地道，受中文式思维影响严重（words problem） 　　2.语句毛病多；层次不清（sentence problem） 　　3.段落层次不分明；衔接不紧凑（paragraph problem） 　　4.书面不整洁（handwriting problem） 　　二、增强书面表达效果的技巧 　　下文从遣词、造句和谋篇三个方面探讨如何提高写作技巧与能力。 　　1.遣词 　　I.用词准确的原则 　　①I will have a/an____________（date；appointment）with Professor Liu this afternoon on my term paper. 　　②Finally，our class_______（won，beat）their class. 　　II.用词多实少虚的原则（选择具体的词汇） 　　The food is good不如The food is tasty/juicy/fresh/ mouthwatering/appetizing. 　　“走出房间”，一般的词汇是： 　　walk out of the room 　　但是小偷走出房间应该说： 　　slip out of the room 　　女士走出房间应该说： 　　sail out of the room 　　小孩走出房间应该说： 　　dance out of the room 　　老人走出房间应该说： 　　stagger out of the room 　　III.不要用中文思维来写英语 　　①光阴似箭！不是Time is like an arrow！而是Time flies！ 　　②接电话不是receive the phone而是Answer the phone 　　③人山人海不是people mountain people sea而是hundreds of thousands of people 　　④好好学习，天天向上不是Good good study，day day up而是Study hard and you’ll make progress every day. 　　2.造句 　　I.句子简洁原则 　　①Mr.Smith likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France可以换成Mr.Smith prefers French wine. 　　②She is attractive in appearance，but she is a rather foolish person.可换成She is attractive，but rather foolish. 　　II.使用较高级的句式原则 　　①We all think he is great可换成We all think highly of him. 　　②Suddenly I thought out a good idea.可换成A good idea suddenly occurred to me. 　　③As a result，the plan was a failure可换成The plan turned out to be a failure. 　　III.句子多变的原则（使用较丰富的句式） 　　①To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 　　What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 　　②Though I’m weak，I’ll make the effort.（使用倒装句） 　　Weak as I am，I’ll make the effort. 　　③He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.（使用强调句型） 　　It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew wha