四级专项写作专题图画及图表作文分析报告.pptVIP

For this part, you are allowed30 munutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below. Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. * 基本提纲模式 第一部分：图表描述。简单描述图表所揭示的某 种社会现象的变化发展情况； 第二部分：原因或根源。阐述导致这种社会现象 或发展变化的深层次原因； 第三部分：结论或评论。对这种社会现象进行利 弊评述，也可以简述个人观点或对这种趋势可 能造成的后果进行预测。 * 历年真题回顾及分析 1991.6 Changes in People’s Diet2002.6 Student Use of computer * Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below. Average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week * 1. 上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 * 写作思路 Para. 1—利用图表（只在此段中描述图表）描述使用计算机的情况，突出在使用计算机小时数上的变化。 Para. 2—指出造成这种变化的主要原因。 Para. 3—计算机在为学生带来益处的同时也造成了一些问题：首先，由于在计算机上花的时间太多而荒废了学业；其次，学生的身心健康受到了一定程度的伤害。 * Changes in Peoples Diet in China(1991.6) * Outline 1．State the changes in people’s diet within the 5 years;2．Give possible reasons for the changes;3．Draw your own conclusions. You should quote as few figures as possible * 写作思路 Para. 1—重点描述图表中的总体信息，即1986～ 1990年这5年中人们的饮食结构的变化，同时对图表中提供的信息进行比较说明。 Para. 2—分析中国人的饮食结构发生变化的原因。 Para. 3—根据比较和分析，得出最后结论。 * Model composition The period of 1986—1990 saw great changes in the diet of the Chinese. (根据图表信息概括出某一现象) The consumption of grain has decreased by 4%, while the consumption of high quality food, such as milk and meat, has increased steadily. （对图表数据进行概括性描述） * The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. （分析变化的原因）First, people are much wealthier than before. With the improvement of people’s living conditions, they can afford to buy good food.（原因1）Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. Lack of certain amount of meat or milk,