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一次旅游经历 一、体裁：记叙文，游记 二、Vocabulary 风景scenery，landscape， 泰山：Mount Tai Taishan Mountain 中国第一滩 the First Beach of China. 西湖：the West Lake 难忘的：memorable unforgettable an unforgettable experience. 表示交通的：Go somewhere by train/ cable cars/ subway… 1.Title: Trip---- A Trip to Beijing A Memorable Trip 2. 时态：过去时 3. Summary (原文划分一下结构帮助归纳） 1）The writer tells us that he paid a wonderful visit to Beijing last month. The writer talks about his wonderful trip to Beijing last month. 2) During his trip, he visited many places of interest. 3). The trip left a great impression on him. The writer talks about his wonderful trip to Beijing last month. During his trip, he visited many places of interest, which left a great impression on him. 点题句 指向（时间，地点，人物，） 进展 First, we arrived at_________. Description( 1-2句：about the place; about what you did there) Later/ Then we visited____. Description.(1-2) Finally we came to_____. Description(1-2) In the morning…at noon/ in the afternoon…at night…. 回应：your feelings. This reminds me of one of my wonderful trips. It was a nice day when my good friend and I made a trip to Guangzhou. There were many attractions. Our first stop was Zhenhai Lou. As one of the landmarks in Guangzhou, it now becomes the Guanzhou Museum for its long history and rich collection of relics. We read many ancient poems written by famous poets there. Then we visited the Chen Jia Ci, where there are famous works of stone carving, wood carving, brick carving, ivory carving and other traditional crafts. That night we came to the pearl River and enjoyed the beautiful scenery of Guanzhou at night. Although I felt very tired, I thought this trip was wonderful and memorable, for not only did I enjoy my time, but also I learnt a great deal of useful culture knowledge about the city. 同学们的病句 1.I was memorable with it though I was young then. 2.What makes me unforgettable was the trip to Beijing. 3.I had been to Shenzhen with my