2017年MBA作文(小作文讲解).ppt

Sample Directions: Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you? bought? from an online store the other day, Write an email to the customer service center to 1) make a complaint and 2) demand a prompt? solution. You should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Zhang Wei instead. Do not write the address.(10 points) Dear Mr. Manager, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the electronic dictionary I bought from your online store the other day. During the five days the dictionary has been in my possession, problems have emerged one after another. For one thing, the screen is always black, making it no different from a traditional one. For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the dictionary’s operation for only two hours. Sample I shall appreciate it if you will replace my electronic dictionary with a new one or declare a refund. I really hope that a timely response could be made soon to solve my problem. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei Practical Writing 大纲要求 小作文 应用文 100 字（标点符号不计算在内） 信函、备忘录、通知和报告等 10分 评分标准 9-10分 很好得完成了试题的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果 包含所有的内容 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇 语言自然流畅，语法错误极少 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰 格式与语域恰当贴切 英语（二）小作文 年 份 考 查 形 式 主 题 2010 感谢信（+邀请） 感谢美国同事的款待+欢迎造访中国 2011 祝贺信（+建议） 祝贺表弟/表妹考上大学+给予建议 2012 投诉信（+请求） 对网店所购的电子词典给予投诉 2013 邀请信（+介绍） 邀请同学参加义卖会+介绍活动细节 2014 请求信（+介绍） 请求舍友给予生活建议+自我习惯介绍 2015 通知（+介绍） 暑期下令营志愿者招募 Structure 称呼 Salutation 正文 Body of Letter(目的+内容+礼貌 性收尾语) 客套结束语 Complimentary Closing 署名 Signature Format (缩进式） Dear xx, (salutation) I am writing to … (body) … I am looking forward to receiving from you soon. Yours sincerely,