中考英语专题书面表达外研社知识精讲.docVIP

中考英语专题书面表达外研社 【本讲教育信息】 一. 教学内容： 中考专题书面表达 二. 重难点讲解英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？ 一写作决窍 总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚； 关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整； 组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。 二写作步骤 1. 认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么（即写作目的）。 2. 确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 3. 写完要点，但不随意发挥。 4. 先草稿，后抄写。 三习作点评 2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组（14分） Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. ·What exactly your hobby is; ·When and how you became interested in this hobby; ·Why you enjoy your hobby; ·About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1. 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3. 词数6080。 学生习作A：My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself. ① 改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 ② also的位置应放在can之后。 点评：档次9—11分。 ① 要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 ② 句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 ③ 有少量错误。 学生习作BMy hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true. ① 开门见山、点题。 ② 真情流露，理由充分。 ③ 文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然。 ④ 巧妙使用句型以表决心。 点评：档次1314分。 ① 清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。 ② 语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。 ③ 恰