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Task C-4 Response to Keith Contents of teaching 1) Summing up the students’ performance in the previous assignment. 2) Skill: refutation Sample article: My Perfect Wife by Keith Lanman. Part one: Summing up the students’ performance in the previous assignment More examples on language refinement. A tip on style association（同义）联想 他名声好。 He enjoys a good reputation. is held in high repute. is held in high esteem. is held in good repute. is of high repute. is of good name. Diction 措辞 你在骗我？ Are you kidding? 汤姆，不要骗人。 Tom, don’t tell stories. 真理若加以夸大，也许就成了骗人。 Truth, if exaggerated, may become false hood. Pattern Review: imperative clause + and you will … Examples. Listen to a good teacher, and you will hear the loudness, the quality and the musical note of his voice always changing according to what he is talking about. 听良师讲课，你会听到他的音量，音质，乃至嗓音中的乐感，俱都随话语的内容而变化。 Examples Hold a picture of yourself in your mind’s eye, and you will be drawn toward it. Picture yourself vividly as defeated, and that alone will make victory impossible. Picture yourself as winning, and that will contribute immeasurably to success. Do not picture yourself as anything, and you will drift… 如果在你的心目中有一个自我形象，你就会朝这个形象靠拢。如果你把自己活灵活现地想象为一个失败者，单凭这一想象，你就会与成功无缘。如果你把自己想象为一个成功者，你的想象就会不可估量地助你走向成功。如果你对自己毫无想象，你就会随波逐流，一事无成。 Examples Couple the high divorce rate with the fact that many were latchkey children and you get a generation who may have had more time alone than any in history. 如果你将高离婚率与许多离婚者曾经是挂钥匙的孩子联系在一起想，你就会看到，他们是历史上经受孤独的时间最长的一代人。 Part Two Input reading My Perfect Wife by Keith Lanman. Discussion Before reading the sample article, please share your ideas about your perfect future wife/husband. My Perfect Wife The perfect wife will be different for every man because no two men are looking for