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写作提升1 句子间、段落间的衔接、过渡与写作训练(1) 一、句子间的连接词 连接词可以使句子之间的联系更加紧密，更具有逻辑性。 1．表示先后顺序：first(ly)，then/next，after that，to begin with等 2．表示递进：in addition，what’s more，to make matters worse，moreover，further more等。 There is no denying that telecommuting is a wonderful source. First，we can purchase our favorite goods via telecommuting. Moreover，companies can make business transitions. Furthermore，it is a perfect way to cut down costs，for both individuals and companies. What’s more，it can decrease the flow of currency. 3．表示并列：and，or，as well as，neither...nor...等。 Either you are mad，or I am. 4．表示解释说明：in fact，in other words/that is to say等。 The student got only fifty marks. That is to say/In other words，he didn’t pass the exam. 5．表示转折：but，or，otherwise，on the contrary，instead等。 The woman didn’t keep the money. Instead，she donated it to the charity. 6．表示原因：because，as，since，thanks to，as a result of等。 Thanks to your help，we could complete the project in time. 7．表示结果：as a result，so...that...，such...that...等。 Bob risked his life to save a girl. As a result，he was given an excellent job. Ⅰ.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密 1 On the one hand，I am your manager，andon the other hand，I am also your friend. 2．John teaches wonderfully. besides，he writes a lot. 3．English is a useful language. For one thing，it is an official language in the UN. For another thing，it is widely used in business，science and technology. 4．Japan is not a big country. On the contrary，it is very small. 5．Some people are overambitious. Therefore，they are usually unhappy. 6． To begin with，I need your name and address. Then，when’s your birthday? 7．The young man didn’t enjoy his previous job. On the contrary, he finds the new job very interesting. 8．That document was very important. However，she lost it. 9．Your suggestion is thoughtful. Moreover, it is practical. In a word，it is a good suggestion. 10．Red is attractive.Many fast food restaurants， therefore，have red furniture or walls. Ⅱ.根据汉语意思补全下列句子，要注意连接词的正确使用。 1．他先去了法国，然后又去了美国。 First，he