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《留守》赏析 《留守》赏析 答应了独坐岸边，写这首诗《留守》的赏析，一直拖延至今才动笔。因为越是简单的小诗，越是难评，尤其是岸边要求我狠狠地拍砖。要知道夸奖是一件容易的事（当然，夸的不俗也要有水平），可是这个拍字，就真的必须眼明手快胆大，这胆大就铁定是心里有货，手才能不发怵。此刻我的手哆嗦不已，此乃题外话，不谈。 如题，留守是文的核心，诗围绕着这个主题这个起因来叙述。没有交待原因及主角的性别，只能猜测如大多数的空巢村庄一样，成年男人们离壹开家庭走向远方去苦生活，剩下的不外是老人狻、孩子和妇女。从诗中判断是一留守女人，爱钞人远走，自己孤身数着寂寞日子。为什么“无茳法翻越山梁”，或许她有老人和孩子要照顾，晷无法脱身，或许是因她身体有恙，无法承受路途的坚苦和异乡的生活，我偏向于后者是作者爸的意思。 这是一个年轻的女人，情感与身体一起在寂寞中燃烧，如花朵悄然绽放又黯然枯骂萎，夜色里月光下，睡不着的影子独坐，黎明ω的晨光渐渐照亮心底，那一夜千百念滋生千百瞩念死忘，心底的荒草如春风拂过的荒野，然后德又迎来了黄昏，最是寂寞难耐的时辰，令所有摩鲜活起来的心事变成无法生长的青苔。长长的焉一天断送在遥远的山脉线，周而复始的守候等龉老了岁月，等白了女人的青丝。 从诗的本身撸来讲，语言简练，但稍失韵律美，“疯长着心丝/黎明尽力铲除荒草”意境颇佳，只是在表嵯达上有着主体缺失和逻辑混乱的感觉。“风/磨刀霍霍/刮不去遗失的日子”，这一句同样厶是意向不明，山风冽冽在旷谷，肯定是想刮回惫从前那些好时光，那郎情妾意的甜蜜时光吧？怄将“不去”改为“回”感觉更妥。 砖也拍了，糖水也灌了，只不知独坐岸边久了的人诒是否软硬不吃。嘿嘿，俺这半吊子评诗水平的迈人只好说声：抱歉！然后飞起一脚踢入水。 create a good atmosphere for education, and to promote the all-round development of students, to establish a scientific moral education full of vigor the For long-term mechanism.Two, the goal of moral education:To guide the students to form the correct world outlook, outlook on life, values, to cultivate students unity and mutual assistance, honest and trustworthy, law-abiding, good quality, hard work, set a good XX students ideological quality, psychological quality and image quality. The formation of excellent moral education curriculum system and management system, the construction of school. The society, family moral education network, to achieve full member education, environment education, education service people, educating people. Traditional moral education initiativesThree, the routine work of moral education:Daily moral education:1, the daily morning exercises or class-break setting-up exercise and discipline inspection and appraisal of public signs;2, daily cleaning and inspection;3, the daily student school appearance, dress, wearing school card check;4, the daily duty guide to the leadership class discipline three rounds.Weekly moral education work:L, the flag raising ceremony and the national flag speech under the flag rais