作文评讲 使用非谓语短语使文句简洁.pptx

作文评讲; 请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，就信任这一话题，用英语写一篇作文。 Trust is the most valuable thing in this world. it cannot be bought, or gained by force. it comes deep from one’s soul. it can redeem the soul and make the heart full of purity and confidence. 注意： ①无须写标题，不得照写英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限； ③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例； ④词数为120左右。;使用非谓语动词(短语) 使文句简洁;要修改的例子： When I entered the middle school, I found it difficult to learn English well. (吴风泽) ;4. I was shocked by what he said. I made up my mind to trust myself. (董成) 改写： _______ by what he said, I made up my mind to trust myself. ;7. Having been promised he would come back soon, I lent my umbrella to him hesitately. (肖智敏) 改写：________his promise that he would come back soon, I lent my umbrella to him hesitantly. ;10. I had a quarrel with my best friend because I told a lie to him. (石聪) 改写：I had a quarrel with my best friend because of _______ him. ;总结：那些地方可以转换为非谓语动词短语;3. When the museum is completed, it will be open to the public next year. ________________, the museum will be open to the public next year. ;3. His father died early, which left the family hopeless. His father died early, ______________________. ;2. I have not decided whether I should accept it or not. I have not decided ____________________ ;非谓语动词完成句子及翻译练习 : 见资料.; Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which trust is the most valuable. it has helped me to become confident and even changed my life. In fact, it was not until Mr. Liu became my English teacher that I realized its importance. at that time, I was very shy and I didn’t think anyone ever took notice of me. one day, we are asked to recite a text. Mr. Liu said that only after we recited it to him could we go home. my classmates left the classroom one by one. at last, I gathered courage to stand in front of him, but before I started, he said in a low but clear voice, “I trust you”. you can’t imagine how much his words meant to me.