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5.数据法 例1：According to a recent survey, about 85% of the people are in favor of Golden Week and 15% regard Golden Week as a waste of time. 例2: A recent statistics shows that..75% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation. 6.引言式 题干: The Importance of Knowledge Francis Bacon, the great philosopher, once remarked, “knowledge is power”. This is still valid（有效的） in modern times. Only by obtaining useful knowledge, can we contribute more to the society. 1. 非名词主语 1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life. Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life. 2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible. 2. 主谓错位 1)Reading books can acquire knowledge. People can acquire knowledge from books. 2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV. Now people can’t live without TV. 一、主语错误　 常见错误归纳 二、谓语错误 1. 重谓语 1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated.　　 2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty. 3) There are many people think that... There are many people who think that...或者直接说Many people think that... 2. 非动词谓语 1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it. Some people firmly agree, but others are against it. 2)It is said that the place worthes touring. It is said that the place is worth touring. 3. 主谓不一致 1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English. I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English. 2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data. I use a disk because it holds plenty of data.. 三、代词错误 1. 偷梁换柱 1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when w