记叙文的写作方法及竞争.ppt

Fill in the blanks 记述段落(文)的写法 记叙文的第一句话，交待时间地点： 　　典型句型 (1)原文没有时间地点，The other day, I was doing sth, when …. (2)原文有具体的时间、地点：This particular day began at+时间点 in the morning /afternoon /evening in+地点. 　第二句话，交待人物 典型句型： Sb1. was/were doing sth…when +　sb2. did sth. This particular day began at 3:00 in the afternoon in my office. I was working hard when a football broke my window and hit my head. 第三句话：推动情节发展 常用句型： At this very time,sb. did sth. At this very moment, sb. did sth. All of a sudden/ suddenly,sb. did sth. 练习 At this very time, a boy came towards me and told that he was sorry . 第四句话：介绍故事的结果或谈自己的感受 Then,… Finally,… Personally, I think that… I learn from the story that… 练习 Personally, I think honesty is the best policy. when I was working in my office, a football broke my window and hit me. catching the ball, I went downstairs, wondering who kicked the ball. a boy walked towards me ,saying that he was sorry to hit me. It was he that kicked the ball. telling him that he was a honest boy, I gave the ball back to him, saying that he should be more careful next time. we said good-bye to each other. I think that honesty is the best policy. (200 points) 　　 3:00 in the afternoon I was working hard a football broke my window and hit my head. At , I went downstairs, thinking of what had happened. 　　 a boy came towards me and told he was sorry . It that told him to be careful next time. we said good-bye to each other. 　　 I think that honesty is the best policy. 记叙文写作的模板 500 points Shorten this passage with using the above sentences . This morning, I was going through the door when my daughter played there. At this very time, I accidentally hit her. She shouted at me. Then I said sorry to her