2013中考英语作文突破指导方案研究.ppt

5.　代词错误 They are good for us body. I hope me also become a basketball player. They are good for our body. I hope I also become a basketball player. 6.　缺介词或介词错误 I thank him very much help me study English. He even came to my home for help me. I thank him very much for helping me study English. He even came to my home to help me. I like it because it’s exciting and good for my healthy. I have ever gived up English. (单词错误) (动词P.P.错误) I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health. I have ever given up English. 7. 其他错误 It’s good for my health. Not only make me brave, but also make me become taller. If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to sports every day. It’s good for my health. It not only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller. If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day. （缺主语） （句型错误） Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. 1. I climed slowly and was very tried. 2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb. climbed tired unforgettable somebody 3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. Spelling（拼写） （others) Friday 4. I can’t forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together. I can’t forget that day because 5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever. ! Capital letter（大小写） Punctuation（标点符号） 6. I will remembered that day forever. remember 7. I thought it is hungry. was 8. My grandmother always tidy up my room. tidies 9. How unforgettable this things is! thing Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them. Tense（时态） Verb agreement (主谓一致) Word form (词形） 10. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before. With my father’s help, 11. To cut a long story to short, …. To cut a long story short,… 12. I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother. by bus 13. My mother told me don’t give it up. told me not to give it up Find out the mista