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绿色倾斜句：为可替换上一句的句子，防模板重复，第一次看只看黑色 紫色：自己填充的 以2011年爱心和时政热点”小悦悦事件”人们冷漠缺乏爱心来说明同样一篇模板的变通。 ( 第一段，简单描述图画) Shocked /moved as I, what I have seen in this picture?/cartoon/ drawing/ painting ?which??is so symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive ,as is apparently demonstrated above, 爱心像一盏明灯越在黑暗中越亮love is a lamp which functions perfectly only in darkness.（描述图画内容）.( The other picture informs us that_______________________如果有图二，用来描述图二) . what a philosophic and thought-provoking/ compelling scene it is！（出题的哪幅图画不让人深思呢？）（最后一句的可替换句However symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather thought-provoking/ compelling implications） ( 换个说法的第一段，简单描述图画)I felt shocked / moved, when I see this instructive /symbolic/ interesting /educational picture, and find its profound lesson demonstrated in it, 爱心像一盏明灯越在黑暗中越亮love is a lamp which functions perfectly only in darkness.（描述图画内容）.( The other picture shows ______________________用来描述图二，如果有图二)，a thought-provoking scene which is related to morality.. 我被图画描述的内容深深的震撼/感动了，它是这么的有象征意义/有趣/有教育意义/有启发性。像上幅图画/漫画中描绘的那样_______________。这是多么有哲理和让人深思/引人注目的场景啊!(你第一眼看它也许会觉得它有象征意义/有趣/有教育意义/有启发性，然而这幅卡通图画确实有让人深思/有引人注目的意义) （消极主题意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously /Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon of lack of人们爱心缺乏 love in people（主旨）which is both educational and thought-provoking[which is so thought-provoking and inspiring 替换is both inspiring and thought-provoking]. You dont have to look very far to identify the reasons for it. First and foremost , people are attaching too much importance to the improvement of their material life that they neglect the development of the spiritual and moral values，and consequently, people tend to pay more attention to self-interest /their own interest and do a lot of things insensibly（注意第一个原因句前半句是国情后半句是意志品质精神类，很容易万能）Furthermore, there are an increasing number of people who do not realize 爱心对建设和谐社会的重要性the importance of love in constructing a harmonious society（