英语四级写作指南.ppt

. 5.1.6. 一致方面的错误 One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically. One serious problem human beings are faced with is how to use our natural resources economically. Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is in season. Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season. . 5.1.7. 词的误用 First we should use our natural resources in an economic way. First we should use our natural resources in an economical way. 5.2. 句子层面5.2.1. 中国式英语 Have money can do many things. 有钱可以做好多事情。 There are many people do morning exercise in the park. 有很多人在公园里面晨练。 His joke made me laugh to death. I was quite amused by the joke he just told. Chinese people are devoting themselves to the physical exercise. Why? Because they think it is very important to their health. More and more people are spending part of their free time on physical exercise because they realize the importance of regular physical exercise. . The price of the dictionary is too expensive. The price of the dictionary is too high. Smoking cigars will do harm to our body. Smoking cigars will do harm to our health. Reading books can acquire knowledge. Through reading one can acquire knowledge. Now people go abroad is not easy. It is not easy for people to go abroad now. Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more. Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad. The chief reasons for the change have five points. There are five main reasons for the change. . 5.2.2. 悬垂修饰语 悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清． To do well in college, good grades are essential. “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚 To do well in college, a student needs good grades. . 5.2.3. 主谓不一致 集合名词（army, audience, cabinet, class, company, committee, crew, crowd, family, government, group, party, population, public, staff, team等）作主语，如果指整体，则谓语动词用单数；如果指具体成员，则谓语动词用复数。 表示时间、距离、价格等的复数名词或短语，如果强调整体，谓语动词用单数；如果强调具体数量，则谓语动词用复数。 单数名词如果跟着alon