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2010年高考英语书面表达解析与范文（教师版） 一 批驳错误型 （1）2010上海春考 有人认为高三学习就是做试卷、对答案，对学生各方面能力的培养几乎没有作用。用具体事例谈谈你对此事的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容： ●你的观点 ●具体事例 简析：本文看似开放式命题，即对错二元论，可以自由发挥，但如果仔细读题，就可以发现：如果从批驳错误观点出发来写，更便于自己发挥。 One possible version ： It is widely acknowledged that senior 3 students nowadays have to be faced with mountains of examination papers. Each day or even each class, they cycle the routine as taking exams then checking answers .In my opinion, it is almost of no value for us students to follow the steps mentioned above. Take my neighbor, Jenny, for example, who was always a pretty and happy girl, smiling all the time. She was admitted into Qinghua University last year. While I was talking with her about this issue , she would frequently remind me, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy ”.Therefore , a top university ,first of all , is urging students to create and cultivate themselves. Obviously, this teaching and learning model doesn’t satisfy the demands of a creative world. Last but not least, too much tests easily depress even disappoint students both physically and mentally. As for developing senior 3 students, we students should have our own time and teachers should find more approaches to improving us. （2）04年上海春考 Il. Guided Writing Directions Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions below in Chinese. 简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。 简析：本文看似开放式命题，即对错二元论，可以自由发挥，但如果仔细读题，就可以发现：如果从批驳错误观点出发来写，更便于自己发挥。 One possible version ： As we all know, today students have more and more homework. They use their spare time to do the homework besides taking many other lessons such as computer science, piano lessons, math, chemistry and English. Therefore, students have no time to relax and develop themselves. In my opinion, it’s quite dangerous for them not to have spare time to play .First, we say students should have some time to relax and play. This doesn’t necessarily mean that they will wa