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例析书信类作文 　　假如你叫李华，是一名高中生。你打算暑假去英国旅游。请根据下面的要点提示，给你的英国笔友Lily写一封信向她咨询去英国旅游的情况。 中国论文网 /1/viewhtm　　内容包括：1. 哪些地方值得参观；2. 能否去机场接机；3. 其他注意事项。 　　注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文?B贯。 　　Dear Lily， 　　I am so excited to tell you that I plan to travel to Britain this summer. 　　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Looking forward to hearing from you. 　　Yours， 　　Li Hua 　　[审题] 　　这是一篇应用文，要求以邮件的形式向笔友咨询去英国旅游的情况。写作中大家应该注意： 　　1. 有三个内容要点，前两个必须如实表述，不能改变内容，第三个要点的内容可以自由发挥。 　　2. 不要生硬地逐条翻译要点，而要适当地使用过渡词使文章内容条理清晰，结构严谨。还要适当运用高级句式和词汇，为文章增色。 　　3. 第一段要开门见山地说明写信的意图。注意语言要得体和礼貌。 　　4. 词数100左右，不宜太多或太少。 　　[习作一] 　　Dear Lily， 　　I am so excited to tell you that I plan to travel to Britain this summer. Because it’s the first time for me to go there， turn to you for some advice is very necessary. 　　Only in this way can I have fun in your country. Could you help me？ First， as we know， there are many places of interests in Britain. Could you tell me which places in Britain are well worth visiting？ Second， I will go to your country by plane， but I don’t know what to do or where to go when I get there. So could you spare some time to come to the airport to meet me when I arrive？ Finally， I know there are many rules in the UK， I hope that you can tell me as many as possible. For example， if I go out with you to have a dinner， what should I wear？ If you can inform me of these things， I will be grateful very much. 　　Looking forward to hearing from you. 　　Yours， 　　Li Hua 　　点评 这是一篇中档习作。其优点是： 　　1. 要点齐全，语言较为流畅。在行文中，用first， second和 finally逐一提出建议，文章显得有条理。 　　2. 正确使用了一些高级词汇和短语。如turn to sb. for help， have fun， places of interest， be well worth vi