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课前让学生抄写在黑板上 提出问题让学生思考：要点是否齐全？词汇句式是否丰富？连接是否连贯？ 然后让学生修改。 学生修改完后，老师点评，展示这篇例文，全班朗读。 茂名市第十中学英语科高考备考小组 审题 构思 组织材料 拟定提纲 写出初稿 修改 润色 写作步骤 润色 策略 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 润色写作的策略 2. 使用较丰富的句式 2. 使用较丰富的句式 Jeremy Lin —New York Knicks (尼克斯队 )star New York Knicks star Jeremy Lin has not only sparked NBA basketball interest in China, he may also inspire fans to learn English. Not only has New York Knicks star Jeremy Lin sparked NBA basketball interest in China, he may also inspire fans to learn English. Although Lin is very popular, he still has to improve his strength to compete in the NBA. Popular as Lin is, he still has to improve his strength to compete in the NBA. 1. More and more teachers came in, and the classroom became crowded.（with结构） With more and more teachers coming in, the classroom became crowded. 2. His words impressed us so deeply.(主语从句） What he said impressed us so deeply. 3. Zhou Wenjuan is a fast speaker. Nobody can understand her.( 状语从句） Zhou Wenjuan is such a fast speaker that nobody can understand her. Rewrite the following sentences 我去了香港才知道英语的重要性 (一般句式）I realized the importance of English when I paid a visit to HongKong. (强调句) It was when I paid a visit to HongKong that I realized the importance of English. (倒装句) Only when I paid a visit to HongKong did I realize the importance of English. Translate the sentence in varied ways. Conclusion: We can polish our writing by using the following sentence patterns: 定语从句 状语从句 强调句 倒装句 非谓语动词 被动结构 with 结构 名词性从句 Activity 1: Compare two compositions and decide which one is better The Chinese government had been consider to limit the people who will smoking in public in the beginning of next year. It will acquire public places around China should put on the signs of “Don’t smoke”. And the aim is achieving no smoking in publics. It is necessary to do it base on that about 3.5 million people who were smoker and men accqure 75%, another 2