2019年谈英语写作专项训练方略.docVIP

谈英语写作专项训练方略 李小芹 京山县第五高级中学 431800 在英语知识能力水平考核系统中，写作模块无疑是最具综合性和应用性的一项，它集考察学生的词汇、语法、逻辑思维、信息提炼和整合、结构概念以及情感态度取向等于一身，在备战高考的第二轮专题复习训练中，写作训练是重头戏之一。湖北高考英语卷的短文写作的分值分布自2012年起由原来的25分调高到30分，也证明了命题倾向愈加重视对学生英语学习的综合素质的测评，所以在平常的训练中绝不可小视。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖賃軔朧碍鳝绢懣硯涛镕頃赎巯驂雞虯从躜鞯烧。 写作并非一朝一夕之功，除了平常的词汇、句型和经典格言警句的积淀外，平时还要有一双善于观察生活的眼睛和敏锐的洞察力以及丰富的思想情感，这一点在任何一门语言的学习上都是相通的。有些教师出于良好的本意坚持布置学生写日记或者周记，在这个过程中却丝毫不给予任何有价值的提议或者及时进行情感交流，以致于学生渐渐地把训练当成了应付差事，记流水帐成了习惯，并达不到训练预期的效果。我班上一名学生曾经在日记中这样记录道：I hate to go to school. I hate to get up so early every morning to take the morning reading lessons. When I get up I always hear birds singing out of my window. Though they also get up early they at least have freedom and don’t have to be at a same place day after day like me! When I’m on my way to school I always see the street cleaning workers sweeping. Though they may get up earlier than me, they can rest at home after one or two hours’ labor! When I get to school in a hurry, What’s waiting for me there may be blame from teachers for my being late again! When I eventually go out of school gate to make my way home after a tiring day, it is dark outside! Thinking of another day like this , I am so upset! How I wish my high school life could be completed soon! 其中用了很多相同的句式和感叹号来抒发该生对高考压力下高强度的学校生活的不满和无奈，通篇充斥着沉闷的基调。在和他进行了思想交流并给出了一些布局谋篇上的建议后，他把这篇习作改成了另一个版本：It’s really a busy and hard life for high school students such as getting up early every morning. But life is not too bad if you take another view to treat what you meet. Every morning you wake up to hear the birds singing out of the window, you will find it fantastic enough to cheer you up. When you go along the street, you will find it clean with the cleaning workers’ labor. You are enjoying what they offer. So why not appreciate life instead of complaining about it worthlessly? If you try your best to do what you are doing all the time, life is sure to reward you more. 的确，呆在象牙塔内太久的学生的视角和生活体验都很狭窄，我们要帮助他们形成积极健康的人生态度和对生活的观察力和敏感度，平时生活中的小插曲或者倏忽乍现的灵感都可以拿来作习作素材，长此以往，才能在写作中表现得更