英语人教版九年级全册中考书面表达写作技巧指导.docVIP

中考书面表达写作技巧指导 九江实验中学 王佳娜 一、教学目标： 旨在辅导学生进行中考书面表达写作技巧的指导 二、教学重难点： 掌握佳作的五步写作原则 三、教学步骤： Step 1. 了解江西中考英语作文命题特点并分析近5年中考作文 Step2. 弄清江西中考英语作文评分标准 结合同学们的作文范例和中考优秀范例进行对比 Step3. 讲解书面表达应具备的写作技巧 审—列—加—连—美 五步写作原则 结合范例来讲： 假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文，简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。 陈述方 主要观点 赞成者 1. 善意的谎言是出于好意，说了不为过 2. 善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处 3. 善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信 反对者 1.善意的谎言也是谎言 2. 谎言会伤害友情 3. 谎言终究不能持久 你的观点 。。。（至少两点） 1、审 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。另外还要审人称、审时态、审格式、审内容、审重点部分 2、列 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 将列出的简单表达连词成句。 White lies are out of kindness. It is all right to do so. White lies can help people get on well with each other. Sometimes white lies may make people more confident. A white lie is a lie as well. Lies do harm to friendship. Lies never go far. 3、加 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 a nice head：Last week our class have a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. They have different opinions. a nice body: Some people think… Some people disagree… a nice tail: A coin has two sides. In my opinion, white lies both have good ways and bad ways. Sometimes it can help someone, but it also hurts others. 增加与文章相关的句子，丰富内容。 方法:添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容。 结合范例讲解。 Is it OK to tell white lies? Last week our class have a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. They have different opinions. Some think it is all right to do so out of kindness. A doctor usually tells white lies to patients who are badly. White lies can often help people get on well with each other. They may make one confident. Many others take telling lies very seriously. They insist that white lies are lies after all. They do harm to friendship. What’s worse, lies never go far. A coin has two sides. White lies both have good ways and bad ways. It can help someone, but it also hurts others. 4、连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not