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Module 9　模块话题写作[见学生用书B36] 【好题在线】 我们生活中有很多东西都是前人偶然或特意发明的，直到今天仍在发挥着重要的作用。仔细阅读表格内容，写一篇80～100词的文章来介绍表中的三项发明(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Inventions Inventors When Use Basketball James Naismith 1891 Play Drinking straw(吸管) Marvin Stone 1888 Drink juice easily Car Karl Benz 1886 Travel easily 　　Do you know much about inventions in our life？Now let me tell you something about them. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 【话题分析】 本模块的话题为“发明和技术进步”，其常见的命题形式有：1.谈论某事物的用途、特点等；2.谈论某个发明(例如电脑、手机、MP4、数码相机等)的相关话题；3.谈论某个发明的作用、给我们带来的变化以及你喜欢这项发明的理由。 【佳作欣赏】 Do you know much about inventions in our life？Now let me tell you something about them. Some inventions like cars were specially invented，and other inventions like drinking straws were invented by accident.① It is said that the first basketball game was played in 1891 by James Naismith.② Basketball has also become a more and more popular sport for people in the world.③ In 1888，drinking straws were invented by Marvin Stone.④ Because of this invention，we now drink juice more easily.⑤ The car was invented by Karl Benz in 1886.It can help people travel easily.It has become more and more popular in the world.They are very useful to us now.⑥ In a word，these inventions make our life more colourful and convenient.⑦ 【精彩点评】 ①此句使用“some inventions”开头，使后面句子的出现自然顺畅而不唐突，同时使用and连接后面的“other inventions…”，将生活中偶然的发明和特意的发明有机地串联在一起，避免了文章结构过于松散。specially意为“专门地；特别地”，by accident意为“偶然；意外地”，这两个修饰词用得别致、出彩，增加了文章的可读性。 ②“it is said that…”，是固定句式，意为“据说……”；此句一般现在时和一般过去时交叉使用，准确地描述了不同事件发生的前后关系，使文章更加真实可信。 ③现在完成时的准确运用使得文章的语法结构复杂化，也点明了篮球运动一直以来广受人们的喜爱。“more and more ＋形容词”意为“越来越……”，这一比较结构的运用使得文章更加形象具体。 ④被动语态是本模块的重点语法，这一语态的运用突出了描述对象“drinking straws”的主体地位。本文中被动语态的多次运用符合英语表达的习惯，使文章语言既地道又有韵味。 ⑤because of意为“由于”，是介词短语，改变了句式的传统结构，让人眼前一亮。 ⑥be useful to意为“有用的”，这句话写得很漂亮，虽然句子很简单，但很好地概括了小汽车实用的特点，让人印象深刻。 ⑦使用in a word作为连接词，表明作者思路清晰