基础写作和读写任务信息合并.pptVIP

基础写作: 信息整合 信息整合的几个常用方法 1非谓语结构 信息点:岛名:钓鱼岛 地理位置:中国东海 归属:为中国固有领土 (1)Diaoyu island is located in the East China Sea (2)Diaoyu island has always been the inherent territory of china. Diaoyu island, located in the east China sea has always been the inherent territory of China Diaoyu island为重复信息,所以将地理位置信息作为插入成分, 用非谓语结构表达出来 2.with结构 信息点:语种:汉语 历史:超过三千年 现状:约1/5世界人口在使用 (1)Chinese has a history of more than three thousands years (2)Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population With a history of more than three thousands years, Chinese is used by approximately one fifth of the world population With后面加以名词为中心语的结构,作为一种补充 说明。 3同位语结构 信息点:人物:杜老师 职业:英语老师 描述:非常可爱,经常用甜美的声音和我们说话 (1)Mrs Du is a very lovely english teacher. (2)Mrs Du always talks to us in her sweet voice Mrs Du, a very lovely english teacher always talks to us in her sweet voice Mrs.Du和 a lovely English teacher为相同信息, 所以安排为同位语较为恰当。 4定语从句 信息点:相关数据(中国 吸烟人数:约35亿 分布:男性占3/4 (1There are approximately 350 million smokers in China (2 Three fourths of them are males. There are approximately 350 million smokers in China. three fourths of whom are males 用定语从句来安排第二个单句的信息,句子结构紧凑 5状语从句 信息点:人物: J K Hollowing 爱好:酷爱阅读及写作 梦想:自小想做一名著名作家。 (1)J K. Rollowing is extremely fond of reading and writing (2) She started to dream about becoming a famous writer when she was just a little girl Since j K. Rollowing is extremely fond of reading and writing, she started to dream about becoming a famous writer when she was just a little girl. 第一个单句充当原因的作用,所以用原因状语从句恰到好处 实际应用 请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物 ①姓名: Allan Stewart ①1②国籍:澳大利亚 ③出生日期:1915年3月7日 ②④世界纪录:2006年获硕土学位时年龄最大 ⑤学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。 ③⑥第一个学位:1936年获得 ⑦第二个学位:医学博士 ④⑧第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006 年获得硕士学位 ⑤⑨第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善 于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。 *硕士学位: Masters degree;*博士: Doctor 第一句: 1 Allan stewart is an Australian 2. Allan Stewart was born on March.1915 Allan Stewart, an Australian was born on March 7 1915 第二句: 1. He was awarded the Masters degree in 2006 2. He held the world record of being the