(完整版)高考英语写作---扩充细节四招.docxVIP

高考英语写作 ---扩充细节四招 方法一 列举具体的实例来补充说明 1．我喜欢体育运动。 I like sports very much. I like sports very much，such as basketball and football. 2．我们青少年应尽力保护环境、拯救地球。 We teenagers should try to protect the environment and save the earth. We teenagers should try to protect the environment and save the earth. For example，we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags，refuse to use single－use products，plant more trees and save water and energy. 方法二 添加与所给信息有关的神态、动作、心理描写及背景渲染等内容 1．晚饭后，这个男的走向卧室。 After supper，the man went to his bedroom. After a rich meal，the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.神(态、动作 ) 2．我有时去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then. I went swimming in the river west of the village now and then. The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染 ) 3．我看到了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. I found some bad behavior.I was quite disappointed to find some bad behavior.(心理 ) 方法三 添加与所给信息有关的原因，结果，条件，让步，手段，目的等内容 1．Tracy 来电话留言：咖啡屋 (Bolton Coffee)见面取消。 拓展：因为她有重要的事情处理。 (原因) Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee. Tracy called，saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee，as she has something important to attend to. 2．帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。 拓展：孩子们进步很快，我也受到他们父母的称赞。 (结果 ) I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons.To my joy，they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me. 方法四 结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等 1．Although I stood all the way home， I felt very happy for what I did. 2．I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. 1 3．In addition，if she would like to learn Chinese，I will be happy to help her. 4．With everyones contribution ，we can make our school a comfortable learning environment. 【巩固练习】 一、翻译下列句子，请扩充细节 1．有时去村西的小河游泳。 (增加条件状语 ) 2．我帮助祖父母干农活。 (增加让步、目的状语 ) 二、运用所学知识，描述下列情景 1．爱好旅游 2．爱好运动 3．喜欢养宠物 _____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________