高考英语二轮复习第三部分写作训练篇专题短文改错第讲逻辑类错误练案.docxVIP

专题五 短文改错 第三讲 逻辑类错误 真题验证 1 (2017 ·全国Ⅲ) 导学号When I look at this picture of myself ， I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically ， and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took ， I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes ， playing pop music ， and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. 答案： When I look at this picture of myself ， I realize of how fast time flies.I had have grown not only physically ， and also mentally in the past few years.About one month but after this photo was took ， I entered my second year of high school and become a taken became new member of the school music club.Around me in ∧ picture are the things this/the they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical that/which instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ， playing pop different music ， and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me latest many happy memories of your my high school days. ? 解析： 删除 of 。考查介词。 realize 后接宾语从句，介词 of 多余。 解析： had 改为 have。考查时态。由时间状语“ in the past few years ”可知，此处强调的是发生在过去的动作对现在的影响，故应用现在完成时。 ? 解析： and 改为 but 。考查连词。 not only...but also... 是固定搭配。 ? 解析： took 改为 taken 。考查语态。 photo 与 take 为被动关系，故应用被动语态。 1 take 的过去分词是 taken 。 解析： become 改为 became。考查动词时态。“我”进入高中第二学年并成为学校 音乐俱乐部的新成员这一系列动作发生在过去，所以谓语动词应用 became。 ? 解析： picture 前面加 this 或者 the 。考查限定词 / 冠词。 picture 作“照片”之 意讲时是可数名词， 因为上文已提到过这张照片， 因此要用定冠词 the 表特指，或者用 this 。 ? 解析： they 改为 that 或 which 。考查定语从句。 things 是个名词，后面接了一个 定语从句，修饰先行词 things ，既可以用 that 也可以用 which 作关系代词。 ? 解析：difference 改为 different 。考查形容词。 名词 kinds 前需要形容词来修饰， 因此把名词 difference 改为形容词 different 。 解析： l