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高考开放作文评分标准 Points that make a good composition 内容充实 思维活跃，逻辑清晰 交际得体，考虑交际对象需求 表达方式丰富，错误较少 判分原则 审题: 1). 对图的描述: What do you see? What is going on? 2). 对图的理解: 立意积极 – 孩子独立 (消极的得3分) 逻辑清晰,有深度 (讲故事的得2-3分) 2. 定挡: 只抄上文或照搬其他文章,与此文不相关的得0分. 3分：描述简单，议论牵强，语言错误多 A old bird at home. Some young birds find food. I think the old bird was ill. It can’t fly. A boy hits the old bird. We can’t hoart animals, because we are friend. The boy make a mistake, who can’t realize. We should protect animal and plants. Only in this way, can we see them not only in picture. 5分：描述较简单，阐述和议论与画面有一定相关性，但过于简单，且语言错误多 Look at this picture above. We can see a bird stay in the tree and she is looking her children fly more and more high. From this picture, we think of my parents. Not only the bird but also my parents, even all of the parents, must hope their children be able to build a happiness life without their helps or after they can’t live with us. As a proverb said ---- how hard parents are! I love my parents and I hope I won’t make them disappoint. 9分：对画面有基本描述，内容有一定中心，但逻辑不够清楚，内容表达不十分到位。有语法词汇错误，但不影响理解。 In the picture above, four little birds have left their mum and are flying in the blue sky. How brave they are! From the picture, I think of something about our-selves. We are eighteen years old now, not a child any more. We should have our own views, not depend on our parents. Being an adult, we realized that we will make livings by ourselves later, so hard working is the most important thing now. What we should do is to make efforts to making our dream come true, like the bird in the picture flying further and further. As can be seen from the picture, a mother bird is watching her babies flying high into the sky. The four little birds seem quite pleased with the fact that they are able to fly on their own. In my point of view, the picture shows us the great mother’s love. As is known to all, “M