高中英语写作公开课课件.pptVIP

welcome 1 Writing By Zhang Hui 2 Ⅰ . Discussion What makes a good essay? 3 4 感知典型范例 —— 词汇层面 1 adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 ? clever ? → wise ? → smart ? → bright ? → intelligent 5 感知典型范例 —— 词汇层面 2 adj. 令人惊奇的 ? surprising ? →amazing ? → astonishing exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 6 感知典型范例 他昨天下午来的。 —— 句型层面 1 He came here yesterday afternoon. (not…until) → didnt until 1. He______come here ______yesterday afternoon. 2. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. no grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误 advanced sentence patterns 使用高级句型 7 感知典型范例 I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged. —— 段落层面 As far as I am concerned , for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are . Whats more , our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society proper link words 使用恰当的连接词 various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式 8 感知典型范例 —— 篇章层面 1 多 卷 面 层 不 次 整 不 洁 清 涂 得 改 较 分 多 语 言 错 误 ; ; ; ; 8 9 感知典型范例 —— 篇章层面 2 任 字 何 数 信 不 息 够 ， 或 不 未 得 能 分 传 。 达 读 者 10 —— 篇章层面 3 neat and clean 卷面整洁 well organized 结构合理 11 the content is complet 内容要完整 Conclusion: What makes a good essay? 1. neat and clean 卷面整洁 2. complete content 内容完整 3. well organized 结构合理 4. exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 5. proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 6. various sentence patterns 用较丰富的 句式 12 Ⅱ .Pre-writing (2013 全国卷 ) 假定你是李华。