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六年级英语作文三篇 六年级英语作文三篇 六年级英语作文三篇 小学六年级英语作文范文【三篇】 Does she like dancing? No, she doesn ’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy. 【要领评论】 这个篇写喜好的文章 , 小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习 , 他没有详细写到刘莹的某一种喜好 , 而是从学习到课余的多种喜好下手 , 对刘莹的各样喜好推行了粗线条地勾勒 . 从“喜好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会感觉这个形象很饱满。 小朋友们写这类“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一 是详细地描述 ; 二是和上边小朋友同样，粗线条地勾勒，两者各有千秋，另处内行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，防止了平淡无奇的弊端。比方上文的“ Does she like dancing? No, she does n’t. ”和“ she says her hobbies make her happy. ” 就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。 【第二篇： Don’t be against the traffic 】 I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7 ：30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can ’t cross the road ,so I wait. If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules. 【要领评论】 这篇作文的题目是“不要违犯交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，表达自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。 小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很简单使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身旁熟习的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。 【第三篇： I Love My Family 】 Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family. 【要领评论】 一个平庸的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端非常灵便，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭呼之欲出，很值得我们去思虑，我们能做到吗 ? 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美以外，在构造上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐一介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，喜好一一细说。最后以一句话推行归纳，起到点题的作用。我们在写近似的作文的时候是否是也可以借鉴呢 ?