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Writing (CET-4)Guo Jia第1页第1页★ Introduction 历年真题范文欣赏 习作基础技能 模拟话题范文 典型句型摘抄第2页第2页★ Models to share Creating a Green Campus In the last few years, environmental pollution has become thefocus of public attention. Many universities have takeneffective measures to build green campuses. Obviously, it hasBeen realized that creating a green campus is extremely important. Actually, creating a green campus contains not only building aBeautiful campus environment, but also fostering a strong senseof environmental protection. Young people are the backbone ofnation-building. Thus, only if they develop the sense ofenvironmental protection can they build a green country in thefuture and contribute their knowledge and energy to the society.第3页第3页 Therefore, as university students, we should play anactive role in the actions of building a green homeland.First, we should always bear saving resources in mind.For example, turn off the water tap after using it.Second, we should assume our responsibilities tospread the spirit so as to call upon more people to joinin this promising project.注意闪光词汇第4页第4页★ Basic writing skills Writing failures1Checking standard23words phrasesWriting models4第5页第5页学生作文中经常出现错误：标题单词拼写、大小写、标点符号随心所欲词语搭配张冠李戴句子时态混乱，主谓不一致非谓语动词从句滥用第6页第6页 分数等级 评分原则 2分条理不清，思绪混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多为严重错误。 5分基本切题，表示思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。 8分基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重错误。 11分切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少许语言错误。 14分切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 第7页第7页英语写作高分秘诀:主题切题＋段落连贯＋语言生动1．句式要有改变① 复合句、并列句② 倒装句（1）虚拟语调中if省略 （2）only+状语置于句首 （3）否认词置于句首 （4）地点副词置于句首③ 强调句型 It is ……that (who)…④ 非谓语动词。⑤ 虚拟语调⑥ 固定句型结构too…to… so…that… such a…that… not only…but also… neither…nor… such as… not …until… so that… either…or… 2．用词面广，遣词造句得当3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯穿顺，一气呵成。第8页第8页列举：1. for the first point, first, in the first place, firstly, first of all 2. for the second point, second, secondly, again, and then, dddddd further more, in addition, moreover, 3. for the l