2023年全国英语高考1卷读后续写我的写作比赛讲评与示范讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习.pdf

读一后. 续写原题目 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter | writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language,［举例子］Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the itanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: Because I love your stories. If youre willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this. Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. 【写作思路】I chose Paul Reveres horse as my subj ect. Paul Revere was a silversmith （银匠） in Boston who rode a horse all night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horses mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but |funny, and unlikely to be anyone elses choice. 【写作过程】What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Reveres horse、I keD 【going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, Great. Now, write it again. I wrote it again, and again, and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to |he enj oyment of writing. If I didnt win, I wouldnt care. 当我在中学的时候，我的社会学老师让我参加一个写作比葬，我想都没想 就拒站了。我不喜欢写作。我的家庭来白巴西，所以英语只是我的第二语 言。写作对我来说是如此困难和痛苦，以至于我的老师允许我通过 演一 个剧本来展示我关于泰坦尼克号沉没的论文，我在剧中扮演所有的角色。 没有人比他笑得更厉害了。 那么，为什么他突然强迫我做一件我肯定会失败的事情呢？他回答说. “因 为我喜欢你的故事。如果你愿意努力，我认为你很有可能获得这份工作。” 受到他的话的鼓彝，我同意试一试。 我选择保罗・里维尔的马