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Word文档下载后（可任意编辑） 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 商务英语考试写作 商务英语考试写作 第一篇商务英语考试写作 第五篇商务英语考试写作 第8篇 你是一家国际大公司的人力资源部经理。你刚刚任命弗朗西斯卡女士为公司总部的销售经理。  给总部的全体员工写一个字数为40-50的备忘录：  (1)宣布对弗朗西斯卡女士的任命。  (2)说明她开始工作的具体时间。  (3)要求总部员工预备欢迎她。  BEC教师：张梦琳老师，担任商务英语听说、企业团训听说主讲,曾在知名企业担任首席口译。从事听说教学十年之久，最愿意与同学共享职场经受，她的教学理念是：Enjoy learning English in the rest of your life!  老师建议：  首先，我们要了解一篇memo的基本格式：  MEMORANDUM  From: Olive HR Manager To: All staff  Date: 12 June, 20XX Subject: Appointment of Francisco  Here we announce the appointment of Francisco as our new Sales Manager of the She will be starting her job next Monday There will be a small welcome party by 9:00 that day so everyone please be on  其次，写一篇作文，我们说任何形式的BEC作文，都要考虑如下因素：  Who is going to read my memo?  What has the reader already known about this?  What does the reader need to know?  How is the reader going to respond my memo?  第三，memo尽量使用短句，这样表达清楚，结构紧凑。  第四，字数超，memo使用词汇要简短干练，确保大家都看得懂。  第五，写memo前要考虑清晰字句的组织，用精练的语言，有头有尾地把memo完成。  Suggested answer:(134 words)  A comparison of ERS and Worldwide Relocation  Introduction  The aim of this report is to assess which of the two companies, ERS or Worldwide Relocation, would be the most suitable for the relocation of Fenway employees and their families from Seattle to  Findings  Both ERS and Worldwide Relocation offer an accommodation and school search Both companies can organise visas and work In addition to these basic services, ERS also offers removal and shipping assistance whereas Worldwide Relocation offers an integration programme and assistance with partner The latter is a key requirement for  Conclusion  It was concluded that both companies go some way to fulfilling Fenways needs, but neither meets all its  Recommendation  We would recommend that Worldwide Relocations be chosen to facilitate the relocation process as its services match Fenways requirements m