2024中考英语作文 建议类 课件.pptxVIP

作文精讲 - 建议类 Dear Li Hua, What a terrible day today!This morning I was late for school and my teacher was angry with me.Then I left my science book at home.Since l stayed up late last night,I felt sleepy in class this afternoon.I could hardly understand what the teacher said.Could you please give me some advice? Yours, Tom 假如你是李华，下面是一封刊登在校报上的信。写信人Tom 想要征求你的意见， 找到解决问题的方法。请你写封信提出你的建议。 80词左右。提示词： put…away 把……收拾好。 写作题目 假如你是李华，下面是一封刊登在校报上的信。写信人Tom想要征求 你的意见，找到解决问题的方法。请你写封信提出你的建议。 80词左右。提示词： put…away 把……收拾好。 审主题：建议类 定人称：第二人称 定时态： 一般现在时 定框架：总分总结构 一 审三定 写作方法 首段点题引出下文 中段分点详细描述 尾段总结发表感受 写作框架 总 Para3 总 Para1 Para2 l am sorry to hear your problems, which are so common that they can happen to most of us. 我很遗憾听到你的问题，这些问题如此普遍以至于我们大 多人都会遇到。 Ttps: 1.普遍的 common 2.如此……以至于 So...that 首殿 点题 首殿 引出下文 这里有一些有用的建议，我认为可能会对你有所帮助。 Here are some useful suggestions I think that may help you. 引出下文的固 定句式。 Dear Li Hua, What a terrible day today!This morning I was late for school and my teacher was angry with me.Then I left my science book at home.Since I stayed up late last night,I felt sleepy in class this afternoon.I could hardly understand what the teacher said.Could you please give me some advice? Yours, Tom 早睡早起 提前收拾书包 和老师/家长沟通 建议内容. 1.Why not do…? 为什么不做……呢? 2.Why dont you do …? 为什么不做……呢? 3.You had better do… 你最好去做…… 4.You are supposed to do .… 你应该做…… 5.Its a good idea to do sth. 做某事是一个很好的主意。 6.If l were you,I would do … 如果我是你，我就会做…… 建议内容8 1.早睡早起 2.提前收拾书包 3.和老师/家长沟通 To begin with,youd better go to bed as early as possible.Enough sleep will help you concentrate more in class as well. 你最好尽早上床睡觉。充足的睡眠也有助于你在课堂上更 加集中注意力。 Tips: You had better do … 你最好去做…… 中间殿 Whats more, why not put your backpack away before sleeping?So you will never leave your book at home. 更重要的是，为什么不在睡觉前把背包收起来呢?这样你 就不会把书落在家里了。 Why not do/dont you do .? 为什么不做……呢? 中间段 Ttpss 中间段 最后但同样重要的是，如果我是你，我会和我的父母交流。 Last but not least, if I were y