高中英语写作课课件.pptxVIP

Writing

DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Content:everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure: *Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾) *Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language: *NoChinglish(避免中文式英文) *NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误) *Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)

Structure Imverypleasedtotellyouthechangesofmylifesincethereductionoflearningloadwasbroughtin.Beforethat,Iwasoftenexhaustedatweekends.Iattendedschoolandhadclassesthewholeday.Intheevening，IwasoftenforcedtodomyboringhomeworkandIcouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Sincetheprogramofreducinglearningloadwasintroduced,mylife,however,hasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ifrequentlypayavisittomuseums,dropinatcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmyleisuretime.Afterlunch,IwatchTV,readstoriesandlookthroughnewspaperstoenrichmyself.NolongerdoIstayup;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10p.m.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.Enjoythefollowingparagraphs:

Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollow.____________,mostfamiliesaretoopoortosendtheirchildrentoschool.__________,theyhavenochoicebuttostayathomeandmakemoney.asaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;HoweverTobeginwithAsaresult使用恰当的连接词Useproperlinkingwords

__________,someparentsthinkthereisnoneedfortheirdaughterstogotoschool.Therefore,theydon’tletthemgotoschool._______,somechildrenarenotinterestedintheirstudies.______________________,somewouldn’tliketogotoschool.Inmyopinion;Finally;Tomakemattersworse;InadditionInadditionFinallyTomakemattersworse

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